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US-AEP GUIDANCE ON
LETTERS OF INTEREST (LOIS)
Many companies express concern that their main issue with USAEP
trade leads is the lack of response they receive from Asian companies.
There are many reasons to explain this occurrence. An Asian company
may only decide to respond to the U.S. company in which they are
interested; a project is put on hold or cancelled; or the lack of
response may be related to the way the initial business contact � the
letter of interest, or LOI � was written. The LOI is the "face" the
U.S. company projects to its potential customers, in lieu of a true
"face-to-face" presentation.
In Asia, initial business introductions are very formal, and an LOI
should reflect that fact. A properly written LOI should be in formal
business letter format on company letterhead and should represent the
best your company has to offer. It should
contain the following elements:
- Name, title and address of Asian addressee
- Dear Mr./Ms./Dr. + full name (often the first name is the family
name in Asia)
- TON # and subject of trade lead to which you are responding
- Your company name and a detailed description of its
capabilities. May follow-up with sending of U.S. company brochures
or catalogues.
- How the U.S. company can specifically assist the Asian
addressee; answer any questions brought up in the trade lead
- Closing (e.g., Sincerely, Yours truly)
- Full name, title, company name, address, phone, fax, email
- No "cute" sayings in the signature line if using email, such as
"The Earth does not belong to us; we belong to the Earth."
Below are two illustrative examples of good and less than
satisfactory LOIs. (Please note that these letters have been
fabricated for the purpose of illustration.)
EXAMPLE 1: A GOOD LOI
From:
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"John Smith"
jsmith@xyzwaterco.com |
To: |
"S. Mitra" mitra@indiawater.in |
CC: |
"Sundaresan
Subramanian" Sundaresan.Subramanian@mail.doc.gov,
"USAEP" etna@usaep.org |
Subject:
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TON# 010427AD01
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Date: |
Wed, 16 July 2001
11:51:28 �0700 |
THE XYZ WATER COMPANY
500 Main Street
Los Angeles, CA 90001
(555) 555-5555
July 16, 2001
Mr. S. Mitra
General Manager
Coimbatore Water Municipality
100 Main Road
Coimbatore 2222222
INDIA
Dear Mr. Mitra:
In response to your trade lead (010427AD01) regarding the
development of a potable water treatment facility, I would like to
take this opportunity to introduce to you The XYZ Water Company,
an international engineering firm specializing in the design and
manufacture of potable water and wastewater treatment equipment.
The XYZ Water Company has provided comprehensive engineering
services to municipalities and industries, particularly the metal
processing and food processing industries, for over a period of 25
years. We have installed water
treatment plants throughout the United States, South America,
Asia, and the Middle East. Our customers can attest to the
quality, reliability and acceptability of our products (see
attachment).
Previous projects range from pilot-size water treatment units
to multi-million-gallon, custom-built plants. The XYZ Water
Company has earned its position as a leader in the following water
treatment activities:
Reverse Osmosis Systems
Water Softeners
Media Filters (activated carbon, mixed media, sand, etc.)
Demineralizers
Sewage Treatment
Membrane Separation
UV Sterilizers.
We feel we could be the right partner for you as you undertake
the development of a 200 MGD potable water treatment plant in
Coimbatore. For more information, please see our website at
www.xyzwaterco.com. In addition, you may feel free to contact me
by fax, (810) 555-3344, or e-mail, jsmith@xyzwaterco.com.
Best regards,
John Smith
Director of Marketing
THE XYZ WATER COMPANY
500 Main Street
Los Angeles, CA 90001
Tel: (555) 555-5555 Ext. 103
Fax: (810) 555-3344
E-Mail: jsmith@xyzwaterco.com
Web Site: www.xyzwaterco.com
Attachment:
P-ProjectReferencesList-4-19-2001.PDF (29k) -- |
EXAMPLE 2: A "LESS THAN SATISFACTORY " LOI
Date sent: Tue, 22 May 2001 08:55:51 -0400
From: Mr. Joe<joe@yahoo.com>
Send reply to: joe@yahoo.com
To: gadmin@usgtn.org
Subject: Re: US-AEP - Environment Trade Lead - Thailand - TON#
010510AG01TRINET -
E00000000110743
Sir/Madam:
This is a letter of interest in supply either water conservatiion
solutions
water in addition to reduction of pollution the specific
product/technology can be
reviewed via our website under the PRODUCTS and RESULTS sections if
you
need/require further information please do not hesitate to contact me
Thank You...
Mr. Joe - CEO
Thank Q, Mr. Joe...
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"Mr Joe" Brown, Chairman / CEO
(e-mail) joe@yahoo.com
http://www.nobadwater.com
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1111 Oak St.
Anywhere, ST 22222
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